Analysis of Believeth Lies
Days are days Night is night
I know now what nothing means in life
Anger is almost near with my faith in you disapating
The mere seconds that pass and more minutes that shed
Rapidly consuming your taught rules are almost dead
So many questions my creator of life
No answers seeping out pointing signs nor left nor right
The name known to all hearts around the world
To nations, to the realm of your never ending darkness
Leaving every thorn pricking blood splatter coming
Through the veins of the heartless
We were forgiven through death in a sick game of who can get more
Even the spiritual with so much perfection and love is unfair to the core
You say forgive thy enemy so we can revenge in their spiritual pain
Noone you said is made the same
Yet not everyone you get to because of self satisfying gain
Why is everyone's forgiveness awaiting to be picked apart and chosen for fun
If we are all different then we are all not on time to our eternal punishment believers know
Only one life to get the golden noose of hope
Scented with a speck of lended strenth and will
To not be late to the scraping of my own chance of redemption
Contradicting your own educating laws with the instilling fear of your wrath all mighty one
Not seen of this world but trusting new versions to many of the one's poor class of lonely waiting to be reconized by the wicked son
Greatest of all gifts is love
Where is the love of forgiveness and redemption for all the souls forced to choke on the vomit of hell
My beloved creator
We all suffer in your trap with you allowing torture to the hearts made with the good
That shall never have failed
One of the heart's of satan's meal is mine
Hear me and ignore the only important vow I ever made to another heart with your blessing and a judge's sign
Unity is not bending
Unity is breaking with every tick of a clock
Love is pushing barriers of unknown hours
I cry and I pray to you to help me find the strength to repair the bond that was promised
--------Silence is louder-------
The communication is not being sought after
I fear is doesn't intend to be
The prayers for another heart before my own is becoming wasted instead of wisely heard
I'm alone inside and out nomatter the day, month, nor year
Right down to the sylobol of the begging words
The wicked show me everyday that i'm alone
The wicked doen't care to be honest or put intact the remaining pieces of your work of hurtful art or agonizing sad tears that you cry in silent tone
The one and only marriage that was everything I ever wanted with a lifelong friend and recently it just began
With the depths of eyes the emptiness blinks reality of the curse that is pathetic, believed to be loyal and only love the greater good out of every heart nomatter the lash I got back
I was made with one of the best hearts in the world
How you could leave me in the pit of hell to be picked apart by their own fears of honesty of conviction
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111 111110101 10111111011 011011011011 100010111111 11010101011 1101011011111 0111110101 11010111101010 101001111010 1011010 1001011001111111 100100011101001101101 11011100111010110001 1111101 111011101111001 11100100101110101011 111110011111111100101000101 101111010111 1010111101 1111101011111010 0101110011001011111101 11111110110110101111101011110101 1011111 1101101000101101111101011 101010 111001111010101011101 111011 110111111 110010100101110110101111000101 1001110 10011011001101 111010010110 1101111111101101011110 10110 000101110110 111100111 01101010111101010011101 1010101101111 1110110101 010111011101 0101111101101001010111110111000111110101 01010101110110101011101001101 1011101001101011101001111001010101111001101111 111111011001 111110011111101111111001010 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 2,927 |
Words | 561 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 6, 5, 5, 7, 2, 5, 5, 6 |
Lines Amount | 46 |
Letters per line (avg) | 51 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 260 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 61 |
About this poem
This poem was written the day before my marriage was over. The most lowest of my lowest.
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Written on May 14, 2022
Submitted by clb102885 on June 21, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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