Analysis of Moonbeams
Anthony Alfaro 2000 (Dallas Texas)
A wise man once said, you’ll regret far more
All the things that you’ve never ventured before
Than all of the things in the world you could lose
If you trusted your heart and the paths that you choose
I never believed that fool till the day
I neglected my heart for fear of the pain
That aching; it came so consistently, surely
I could schedule your leaving me three months, two weeks early
The nights I’ve spent waiting, my hopes for a change
Of heart from my love, or of change in my brain
I’m sure you didn’t know, just how low
Just how broken
I was until words heard beautifully spoken
I was when you reached out
You called me and said
“Cute boy why so lonely?
And eyes why so dead?
You could have all that you wanted if only
You could love someone better
And leave me here lonely”
Perhaps humors recourse used far times too many
Had hurt my perception and chances, had I any
Notes of blue aura and warmth all encompassing
With the scent of a land east of here, west of Tuscany
Had narrowed my judgement, made more narrow still
That when you said wait for me I told you I will
And perhaps even further, as I dwell on at length
I could have been bolder and braver I think
I’ve hidden all texture of flesh unappealing
And rehearsed my eyes to devoid of feeling
My words wrapped in cellophane silvery stanzas
Breaking in knowing what your words demand of
A request I could never in happiness pursue
To be the better side of half of you
Scheme | AABB XCDD XCXEEXFDF DXD DDGDHH XXGGXXII |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0111110111 10111101001 11101001111 111011001111 1100111101 10101111101 110111010010 11101101111110 01111011101 11111111011 11111111 1110 11011110010 111111 11101 111110 01111 11111110110 111110 011110 01110111110 1110100101110 111100110100 10110111111100 11011011101 111111111111 0011010111111 11111001011 11011011010 00111101110 11101010010 10010111011 0011110010001 1101011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,476 |
Words | 301 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 9, 3, 6, 8 |
Lines Amount | 34 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 190 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 46 |
About this poem
This is something I wrote in a night of intense sadness
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Written on June 09, 2022
Submitted by Sirtonith on June 09, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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