Analysis of Your sugar melted

Khrystyna Pelchar 1998 (Lviv)



All my love turned into pain.
Your sugar melted in the rain.
You said that I had left a trace.
But I was late; you’d lost the faith.

There are no tears on my face.
It is my life that I embrace.
Believe me; you don’t need to worry.
You’re just a page in my long story.


Scheme AABX BBCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1111011 11010001 11111101 11111101 1111111 11111101 011111110 110101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 274
Words 65
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted by kpelchar on January 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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