Analysis of Good bye



Alone with his thoughts that he can not bare
Depression won't stop he so scared
Heart is cold, cold as ice soul is empty as empty as his life
Life will end sooner then planed
Please forgive him he has sinned
He is ready to end it all an splatter the walls
Life's a bitch now watch him fall
Walls are red painted in disgust he left behind all so much
He made a choice to end his life to splatter the walls of his life
As he lays to die he writes his final good bye.


Scheme ABCDEFGHCI
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 0111111111 01011111 1111111110110111 1111011 1011111 1110111111001 1011111 111100011101111 1101111111001111 111111111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 468
Words 100
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 364
Words per stanza (avg) 97
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Submitted by Jdwillis9137 on January 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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