Analysis of Whitespace



Ask your questions,
Weigh my words.
They are not adequate,
just crumbs, grains of sand
of what needs to be said.

And also take the in-between realm,
the white in which they are caught,
because no story can exist
if not with sight and hearing
a heart is connecting things.

Allow me also to your silences,
love,
let me there  ̶
shoveling in the snow  ̶
discover your deeper traces,
extract from frozen ground.

I want to warm your nights
in between rigid lines.


Scheme XXXXX XXXXX XXXXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 111 111100 11111 111111 010100011 0101111 01110101 1111010 0110101 0111011100 1 111 10001 01011010 11101 111111 001101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 464
Words 99
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by ludy_b on January 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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