Analysis of Why Me

Sameer Beg 1098 (Karachi)



With hands in hands, we walked along,
Together while singing that beautiful song

Which described life, described us
Described our relation but alas,

We couldn’t get together, couldn’t get along
Though we had known each other for a period too long

My fault it was, she exclaimed,
I was the one, who was to be blamed,

Why not her, why always me
What did I lack, what couldn’t she see?

But the doubts created, the change in behavior
Lost a friend, whom I thought was mine forever

Those lonely nights, those empty days
Those Saturday nights, oh man what can I say

You literally tore me apart,
Breaking me into a million pieces,

Why didn’t I judge you before?
Like a man with million faces

What could I have said, what could I have done,
Why did I lose, when I thought I had won?

- 2002/ Sameer Beg


Scheme AA XX AA BB CC DD XX XE XE FF X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 01011011001 1011011 0110010101 1110101101 11111101010011 1111101 110111111 110111 11111111 101010010010 10111111010 11011101 11001111111 110001101 1010101010 1111101 10111010 1111111111 1111111111 11
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 820
Words 173
Sentences 5
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

I wrote this on 2002. Why I wrote it, no clue :(

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Written on September 09, 2002

Submitted by sambeg on January 24, 2022

Modified by sambeg on January 24, 2022

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