Analysis of Black Part 3: Feeding the Dark



Black Part 3: Feeding the Dark

Not on your life
This world we built I won't give up this fight
This is what I get for embracing the dark

There was magic in the air
I'm holding on so very tight
This forest whispered our names
It won't let us lose to this game.

Not on your life
I know what's deep in my heart
I won't let you surrender to the dark

Drowning in this binding light
Can you feel our bones collide
Close your eyes
Can you feel our flames dancing together
Like they did in those golden days?

Not on your life
This love we have I wont give up the fight
In these monuments of my failings
You are the one good thing
I ever did right

Hand on my heart
I know we will go farther
Than what we did before

You're a part of me.


Scheme a Bca xcxx Bda cxxex Bcxxc dex x
Poetic Form Tetractys  (36%)
Metre 111001 1111 1111111111 11111101001 1110001 11011101 11010101 11111111 1111 1111011 1111010101 1001101 11110101 111 11110110010 11101101 1111 1111111101 011001110 110111 11011 1111 1111110 111101 10111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 747
Words 172
Sentences 4
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 4, 3, 5, 5, 3, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by Njól on January 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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