Analysis of My Birth Land, Ethiopia



My Birth Land, Ethiopia

On high plateau
On ragged mountain
Surrounded by hills and valley
You are scalded by your droughts

Through no fault of yours
All your beauty covered with swift dust
Your hospitality changed
To second degree begged bread for the hungry

You raised me with milk and honey
Something went wrong
Can you tell me?

Your journey to Democracy a priceless effort
You a mother of burnet face
Call them to change your nick-names
I know you will be blessed again
Now and then always my country


Scheme X XXAX XXXA AXA XXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1110100 1101 11010 01011010 1110111 11111 111010111 101001 11001111010 11111010 1011 1111 1101010001010 10101101 1111111 11111101 1011110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 510
Words 96
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 3, 5
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

There are countless people, lived in different parts of the world; leaving their country of origin. There is always a memory to recall, and express feelings to share with readers. Based on that I expressed the following:

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Submitted by yeshigemaneh on December 21, 2021

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Yeshiembet/Yeshi Gemaneh

I was born and raised in Eastern parts of Ethiopia in the city of Harar, I was attended elementary and secondary school in Haile Selassie Day School in Addis Ababa. I remember when I was in grade 7, I won a prize for being the best student - a book "Alice in Wonderland," from Emperor Haile Selassie, King of Ethiopia. From High School, I was rewarded scholarship for higher education on City Administration, and Social Studies in the cities of Luneburg, Aachen and Dusseldorf, West Germany. I had also a humble opportunity of learning Western culture, German language and associated closely with hard working German people. My fascination and love for poems goes many years back, when I was in grade 7, one day our English teacher read, "Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star ...," since then I wanted to write poems. In 1995 I had an opportunity to join, The International Library of Poetry. Since then I expressed on variety of topics or titles; I call it my ABC poems. I see my life experience as my greatest teacher, and I love to share what I have had acquired over many years with others, however, every day I am a learner. It is my strong belief and philosophy, if a person has interest and willpower can achieve his goal. As a child, my important figure was my mother. She taught me the Ethiopian alphabets, and love of family and surroundings that helped me to see many things positively. Unfortunately, despite my wonderful childhood experience and growth; I encountered many ups and down of life journey that too taught me a lesson. Now, I am in my senior years being old is wisdom. There is a saying, "quitters are losers," and I don't want that to apply on me. more…

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