Analysis of Slow Goes The Selling Of It

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Few today are witnessed to rush,
To grab a hold of more fool's gold sold.
Slow goes the selling of it.
With proof and its evidence.

People have become more aware,
A substance wanted...
Is gone and nolonger theirs to declare.
And...
Slow goes the selling of it.
Fraud to buy.
Slow goes the selling of it.
Truth to deny.
Alibis, excuses and using of lies.

People are becoming more aware.
Impressions to make,
Doesn't get them anywhere.
And...
Slow goes the selling of it.
Theft and its corruption.
Slow goes the selling of it.
Conflict interruptions.
Slow goes the selling of it.
Peace to deceive,
As the elite feed greed.

Few today are witnessed to rush,
To grab a hold of fool's gold to touch.
Awakening to be aware,
A substance to want it is just not there.
And...
Slow goes the selling of submitting,
To division.
Slow goes the selling of committing,
To conflict.
And suffering as if this delivers benefits,
For who?


Scheme AxBx cxcDBeBex cxcDBfBxBxx AxccDgfgxxx
Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 10111011 110111111 1101011 1101100 10101101 01010 11011101 0 1101011 111 1101011 1101 1001001011 101010101 01011 101110 0 1101011 101010 1101011 10010 1101011 1101 100111 10111011 110111111 01001101 0101111111 0 110101010 1010 110101010 110 0100111010100 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 923
Words 204
Sentences 27
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 9, 11, 11
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 177
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted by lpahtillah on December 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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