Analysis of What You See In Me



Your eyes blacker than the oceanic abyss

Falling I fell carefree into their bliss

I thought you had saved me from hell

I was born again from what I could tell

But as I held you greedily in my embrace

As I studied the expression of your face

Epiphany overcame me in those eyes

I became all-wise shedding all lies

You beheld in me anti-incarnation

My flesh gave way to divine evisceration

God was what you saw in me

Not a man but Ego Eimi


Scheme A A B B C C D D E E F F
Poetic Form
Metre 11101001001 101110111 11111111 1110111111 111111000101 11100010111 01001011011 101111011 1101100110 11111011 1111101 1011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 461
Words 102
Sentences 1
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted by c_fuqua on December 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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