Analysis of I'm Fine



Numerous stars have gathered in the sky,
twinkling and asking, "How are you now?"
My body terribly weak and eyes dimmed,
"Yes, I'm fine", I spoke out, instead of a cry...

The mosquitoes and the flies have ceased to sing;
the chilling breeze of the night made me shiver...
Only I needed a warm cozy blanket...
But I'm fine, on this hard stony flooring...

Down with high fever and excruciating body pain,
I walked to the shops in search of food and drink...
Their ice cold hearts quenched my thirst...
Still, I'm fine with all the needs stored in my brain...

The sun setting in the west, looked so radiant and round,
I could then see the darkest night,
without the moon, without the sky...
Oh, yes!! I'm fine now, locked in a box underground...


Scheme AXXA BXXB CXXC DXAD
Poetic Form
Metre 1001110001 1000101111 1101001011 11111101101 00100011111 01011011110 10110011010 1111111010 1111000100101 11101011101 1111111 11111011011 01100011110001 11110101 01010101 11111100110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 746
Words 154
Sentences 12
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

This form of poem is called La'Tuin. It follows the rhyming scheme of ABCA... This is a sad poem portraying pain and death...

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Submitted by on November 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Darshayita Paul

Being a young poet, I love to express my thoughts through my writings... I am mesmerized by words and possessed by poems... more…

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