Analysis of Creator’s heart was stone



If human clones form your insult, -
My friend, don’t be naïve, -
You’re scared about the first result,
How God created Eve!

The creator’s heart was stone.
Was futile Adam’s pain -
The rib was only bone
Without any brain.

You don’t need intellect
To rip an envelope,
And motherhood is Fact,
And fatherhood is Hope.

But still my awe to them
It’s not the hidden stock.
Who likes this life exam?
Has a right to make a joke!

I want to fill your life
With worth, and love itself.
And I should thank myself
For what is in my wife!


Scheme AXAX BCBC XDXD XXXX EFFE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 11011101 111111 11010101 110101 0010111 110101 011101 01101 11110 11110 01011 01011 111111 110101 111101 1011101 111111 110101 01111 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 520
Words 102
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Written on 2001

Submitted by leorozum on November 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Leonid Rozumenko

Someone in your domain asks me to send a letter about myself. My pleasure - favorite topic. Who am I? Can’t keep a secret - athletic, open-minded, and generous, with a wide scope, love for women, good company. With love for science and to write something everlasting, which isn’t computer programming anymore. I was born in gorgeous Kyiv (Ukraine) more than 35 years ago, lived in the USA for longer than 4 years and my language is still in progress. My poetry is also a colorful picture of the unseeing battle between “yours truly” and English grammar. My Ukrainian or Russian accent has two unreliable reasons – it’s “for fun” and “hard to get rid of”. The meaning of my last name “Rozumenko” in Ukrainian is very close to “jaba-jaba a dada” in “Crocodile Dundee II”. I have several other weaknesses but I introduce them only to my closest friends. Yours truly, Leo Rozumenko more…

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