Analysis of Depressed



Do you notice too, how heavy
a blanket seems to rest on life?
Sometimes it moves a little,
there’s a breeze, but it falls back.

The season doesn’t  alter
its thickness. The same vault
pushes and oppresses. No air
left to get things going.

Maybe it’s this must …
change that, something different.
Holes in the rigidity, biting things
open, refreshing.


Scheme XXXX XXXA XXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11101110 01011111 0111010 1011111 010110 110011 10001011 111110 10111 1110100 1000100101 10010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 347
Words 61
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted by ludy_b on November 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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