Analysis of A Sweet Dream.

Teresa Whitney 1951 (Tacoma)



In the middle of the night,
Gentle rain I can hear,
Right outside my bedroom window,
I feel you standing near,

Wishing I am to have a glimpse,
Of you if only I may,
So I may dream a sweet dream,
While wanting you to stay,

The moon brings forth a shadow,
Caressing my window pane,
I listen ever so patiently,
For words I hope you will say,

I lay my tired head down,
Upon my pillow soft,
Inviting you to join me,
Here upon my loft.


Scheme XXAX XBXB AXCB XXCX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 0010101 101111 1111110 111101 10111101 1111011 1111011 110111 011101 0101101 110101100 1111111 1111011 011101 0101111 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 414
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Written on October 20, 2021

Submitted by jennybabygirl6982 on October 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Teresa Whitney

Born and raised in Washington State as well as growing up in S. California, I now reside in Mooresville N. C. for the past 20 yrs. A wife for 30 yrs before loosing my late husband, a mother of 2 son's , grandmother of 6 children & great grandmother of 2 . College educated with an AA in Drug and Alcohol Counseling. A past owner of 2 state licensed board and care homes for the elderly. I have traveled the U.S. over and settled in North Carolina. My family is here and new friends I have made over the years. I am an avid Poetry writer enjoying all styles of Poetry, looking forward to having my 1st Poem book published soon. more…

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