Analysis of Weather Forcast



dark clouds collide
above the fainted festival
strong wind and fierce flashes ride
with heavy rains into unfolding walls
and onto roofs with leaking tiles

is this weather force letting the world know
what this land can expect again
the past hasn’t been forgotten here so
nothing is expressed openly when
tanks drive the streets before you count ten

tensions are building up strong
in the higher political echelon
of unscrupulous comrades
to soon violently escalate
if elections turn out wrong

the power play took a new start
heedlessly they toss peoples lives
sweet revenge is in their hearts
unrestrained they rob and strive
the bounty they already divide

rest and peace will not be in this land
if the world doesn’t want to understand
that these elite rivalries
and dished up crime stories  
take numb forces by the hand

lucrative chaos has been planned

help locked in a merry-go-round
of corruption and child abuse
expensive schools but no knowledge found
murder plotted high above the common ground
the fire approaching the fuse

time after time provisional repairs
a mopping with an open tap
performing here no-one dares
nor is commitment a considered step
tomorrow stays tugged in cobweb


Scheme AXAXX BCBCC DXXXD XXXXA EEFFE E GXGGX HXHXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 01010100 1101101 1101010101 01011101 1110110011 11110101 011101011 101011001 110101111 1011011 0010010010 101001 11100010 1010111 01011011 111101 1011011 011101 010101001 101111011 10111101 1101100 011110 1110101 10010111 11001011 10100101 010111101 10101010101 01001001 1101010001 01011101 0101111 1101000101 011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,164
Words 199
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 1, 5, 5
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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