Analysis of I wish
I wish that you could be near,
I wish that I could cry, but I've cried all my tears.
I wish I could take back my words.
I really wish I could, it would be easier if you were in my world and I was in yours.
so close but so far that's what happens when you're two worlds apart
I wish to gain a spot in the depths of your heart.
I wish I could speak but my words are buried
Time is precious but you carried on dancing the dance and singing the same old songs.
History repeats itself but I long to end that cycle.
I wish that I could see straight and think straight, it's kinda hard when you tend to think everything fake.
I wish i didn't feel like a mistake or feel the need to be corrected, erased, and replaced
I wish I had an escape from the thoughts and deep beliefs, and hopes and wishes... that I didn't exist.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111111 111111111111 11111111 11011111110011001101101 111111110111101 111101001111 11111111110 11101110110010100111 100010111111110 1111111011110111111101 11110110011101110100101 1111101101010101010111001 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 802 |
Words | 166 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 12 |
Lines Amount | 12 |
Letters per line (avg) | 52 |
Words per line (avg) | 14 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 624 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 166 |
About this poem
TW it's sad i wrote this about myself. I hope you enjoy it please share it around.
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Written on October 20, 2021
Submitted by KameronM. on October 22, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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