Analysis of Of And From A Mongrel Heritage

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



'Stop?
Stop, why?'

Over there,
On one side...
Of a debating in protest line.
Are those claiming themselves to be,
Victims of a threatening diversity.

'Oh them?
The chosen power brokers?'

And check them out.
More of them,
Have ancestors born...
With diverse ethnic identities.

Open wide your lieing eyes.
And see it for what it is too believe.

'I don't get it.'

Me either.
Now...
Listen to the ones on the other side.
Screaming and yelling to claim,
They too are feeling threatened.

'Threatened?
Threatened by what?'

An ignorance they fear,
Has begun...
To ruin their way of life!

'Hold on.
With my lieing eyes,
Now opened as wide as possible.
On both sides,
Are Black, White, Hispanic, Latino...
Or whatever today their preference.
Along with Asian and...
Native American Indian.'

What else do you notice?

'Some of them,
I can not tell what race they are.'

They are Mulattos!
Mixed.
And...
Check this out,
Both sides are claiming themselves to be...
Greater than all others.

'All others...
Of what?'

Races!
And not one of them is a 'thoroughbred'.
Not in these United States.
Jupiter, Mars or anywhere else.

'Apparently...
That has not been revealed.'

Really? You think so?

'All of that 'mixture'...
Makes the United States a great place.'

All of that 'mixture'...
Made the United States a great place.
But these days I suspect,
Someone...
Has been drugging up the coolaid.
And adding their own blend to the mix.

'Why do you say that?'

Let's go.
If you can't see that now?
You never will.

'See what?
A bunch of crazy ignorant people?
Yelling back and forth?
What's so unusual about that?
However...
What I did not notice before,
Are the clothes the people are wearing.
And...
Should I be impressed by that?'

Hmmm...
I didn't even notice it!

'And you tell me,
To open wide my living eyes!
That's the first thing I noticed.
I know one thing...
If I am going to protest,
In public like that?
At least I am going to dress appropriately!
I mean...
If anyone has a message to sell?
They've got to dress the part.'

Especially,
Doing it publicly.
And all mixed up like that.
What statement is that to be made?

'Boring.
No sense of style or fashion!
And people wonder why...
There is conflict,
Division and racism all over the place.
I'm glad you told me to stop,
And look at that tired mess.'

There are some things in life,
More important!

'That's what I'm saying.
And...
With my 'lieing' eyes now opened wide,
Apparently those protesting...
Have no idea,
How to attract to themselves...
Media attention.
They have got to be...
Comfort zone living isolated suburbanites!


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Poetic Form
Metre 1 11 101 111 10010011 11100111 10101000100 11 0101010 0111 111 1101 101100100 101111 0111111101 1111 110 1 1010110101 1001011 1111010 10 1011 110011 101 1101111 11 1111 110111100 111 111010010 110011100 011100 100100100 111110 111 11111111 111 1 0 111 111100111 101110 110 11 10 0111110101 1010101 10011101 0100 111101 10111 11110 100101011 11110 100101011 111101 1 1110101 010111101 11111 11 111111 1101 11 0111010010 10101 11010011 10 11111001 101010110 0 1110111 1 11010101 0111 11011101 1011110 1111 1111011 01011 1111101101000 11 110101011 111101 010 101100 011111 11011111 10 1111110 010101 1110 01001011001 1111111 0111101 111101 1010 11110 0 11111101 01001010 11010 1101101 100010 11111 10110100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,494
Words 469
Sentences 94
Stanzas 28
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 2, 4, 2, 1, 5, 2, 3, 8, 1, 2, 6, 2, 4, 2, 1, 2, 6, 1, 3, 9, 2, 10, 4, 7, 2, 9
Lines Amount 107
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted by Lp,jr. on October 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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