Analysis of Losing Track Of My Head
Losing track of my head.
One moment I’m here, one moment I’m there.
What is right and what is wrong
Between two worlds of bliss and sorrow
Reaching a point of no return
Still re-routes appear in my sight
My emotion erodes obvious confusion.
Types of feelings I’ve yet to experience before… will I slip or will I fall?
Can anyone tell me my state of mind?
You or you or you or I?
I feel like I’m shooting into the sky.
Can’t go up without coming down.
So on and on the craziness goes
Where my life is taking me, no one knows.
Others happiness has become my fuel
Sometimes losing track of the most important tool.
I’ve built bridges that are destined to fall
Yet maybe some bridges will benefit all
Poker face with an intended flush
I am the ace of spades
Scheme | XX XX XX XA XB BX CC XX AA XX |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 101111 1101111011 1110111 011111010 10011101 11101011 101001100010 11101110100011111111 110111111 1111111 1111100101 11101101 110101001 1111101111 10100101110 011011010101 1110111011 11011011001 101110101 110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 766 |
Words | 146 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 59 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 15 |
About this poem
A freestyle poem that reviews ways to grasp Reality vs. Fantasy
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Written on October 12, 2021
Submitted by jacobd.96850 on October 12, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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