Analysis of Today



I see your method
I see your rhythm
I see you planning to fall.
But don't disregard this, this is a message for all.

Sometimes life knocks you down
Sometimes it turns you around
It makes you want to make an ugly frown.
Frown at who? Gotta be you.

You are the destiny of your future
You can speak it out like a preacher
You can change the choices if you let it
Just make sure you never forget it.

We are our biggest enemies
We create problems that we can't feed
We don't give ourselves a chance
We make it hard to accept the next advance.

Us together can help one another
Us together can learn to be better
Us together can increase the nation wide
Us together can come out and survive.


Scheme XXAA BXBX CCDD XXEE CCXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (20%)
Metre 11110 11110 1111011 110111101011 011111 0111101 1111111101 1111011 1101001110 111111010 1110101111 111110011 111010100 101101111 11100101 11111010101 1010111010 1010111110 10101010101 1010111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 672
Words 135
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem illustrates a message I wanted to share with the American People and US as a whole. It's similar to a motivational speech written as a inspirational poem.

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Written on October 11, 2021

Submitted by tookes2009alleisha on October 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alleisha Tookes

Alleisha Tookes was born and raised from Georgia. Southern girl with city dreams. My favorite passion is writing. A mother to 4 beautiful kids and a GOD fearing woman in Life. I'm 31 years old and I'm blessed and happy to be living my best life. I hope you enjoy this poem and I hope I get to share many more. more…

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