Analysis of More of you



More of you Lord
Makes a better me
Living life
How I think it should be
Finding solutions
When I should seek you
Living in illusion
But crying out to you
Seeking answers from the wrong source
Moved me from God
Like a divorce
So here's my call but to you my God
Only you know the way I have tried
Trusting my savior on this long moving ride
Some calls it life
When their trust is in God
Some call it strife
When others are inside


Scheme ABCBDEFEGHGHIICHCI
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 10101 101 111111 10010 11111 100010 110111 10101011 1111 1001 111111111 101101111 10110111101 1111 111101 1111 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 421
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 341
Words per stanza (avg) 87

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More of God in my life

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Written on October 09, 2021

Submitted by doreenefelder191 on October 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Doreene Felder

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