Analysis of Fall Behind

Amber Shay Allen 1991 (Martinsvilee)



I can fall behind
And take the vaulter
Of my soul I left my life

And with my security
Go I can drown myself
In the mistakes lives I made

Also in the blood I can
Destory my memories just
To cry and kill any trace of love

I can kiss the force
Of evil never try to
Look back I can kill
Myself for salvation
I can kill my spirit
To launch I can watch
My mine flue up with
My heart fly free

I don't care do it
But I must destroy all of me


Scheme XAX BXX XXX XXXXXXXA XB
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 0101 1111111 0110100 11111 0001111 1000111 111001 110110111 11101 1101011 11111 11010 111110 11111 11111 1111 11111 11101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 416
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 8, 2
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

This poem is talking about fall down when you have no one to help you when you are going through something

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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Amber Shay Allen

I am 29, get ready to turn 30 on May 20th. I have lost both of my parents due to cancer, lost my grandparents that was looking after me since my mom pass away. I been living with some of my church family since 2013. they are my family. I love going to church, love animals. I have 2 dogs and 3 cats. more…

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