Analysis of In the Morning Mist of Our School Playground



The Extreme freshness of those misty mornings,
that surrounds my mind and my body...........

The feeling of your killing presence..
Spelt by the cool breeze, that you are around.

The very fragrance of your presence
deeply penetrates my mind, body and soul,

There I hear, the birds' singing,
A cuckoo coos, or is it your voice ?

Perhaps you whispered in my ear, "Hey Himanshu"
My heart beats stopped "Is that you ?"

Oh no ! How can it be you  ?
You have left me years ago....

Still I always keep looking,
You always keep hiding, but..

I know, you are the mist, the mist is you.
Deep in the mist, the time is frozen........

A teenage boy, a uniformed girl..
Bets his life, for his eternal love.

But you chose to be practical.....
Just kill the heart and dissolve in the mist..

Today perhaps the same mysterious mist
goes to some hills and tall buildings.

But I am always there, looking for you..
deep in the mist, with my eternal hope...

But I am sure, you still come to that.....
early morning mist of our school playground.

by Himanshu Lakhani
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Scheme AX BC BX DX XE EX DX EF XX XG GA EX XC FX
Poetic Form
Metre 00110111010 101110110 010111010 1101111101 010101110 1010111001 1110110 01111111 0111001111 1111111 1111111 1111101 111110 111101 1111010111 100101110 0110101 111110101 11111100 1101001001 01010101001 11110110 111111011 1001110101 111111111 1010111011 111 1001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,125
Words 193
Sentences 21
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

A schoolboy, after passing high school, goes to college but unable to forget the beautiful time he had at school with his friend and he misses everything in practical life.....hence this poem. From Himanshu Lakhani

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Written on November 27, 1993

Submitted by imageprint123 on September 11, 2021

Modified by imageprint123 on September 11, 2021

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Himanshu Purshottam Lakhani

Non materialistic Business man exporter of printed books, publishing, packaging specialists in CR (Child Resistance). from Mumbai, India. www.imageprinters.net more…

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