Analysis of Lizette (R.I.L)
Loveable in all ways
Intelligent to the tee
Zany as can be
Entertaining everyday
Terrific in so many ways
Tough cookie I must say
Energetically spontaneous that everyone can see
My worst nightmare has come true
A monster has taken you from me
I'm a disaster without you
I ask myself how this could be
How could I let you leave?
You were my pride and joy
It's just too hard to believe
There are so many days I'd like to deploy
Because every day I sit and grieve
I stay up late thinking about you
I can't get over the fact that you're gone
I hate the fact that I'm always down and blue
I can't call or text you anymore
I can't hold you in my arms
And give you kisses galore
I am trying to stay strong
And not to anything wrong
For you I'll do it for your sister and brothers
It's going to be hard
But I know I can do it
Knowing your Angelic presence is with me.
You're with your Cousins, Aunts, Uncles, Great Grandfather's and Great Grandmother's
And I know you all are having a blast up there as it should be
I Miss You like crazy
I Love You Baby Girl
To The Moon and Back
When I see you again
I will then get my Kiss and Hug from you!
By Dorothy J Garcia
Copyright ©
March 30, 2016
4:40 PM
| Scheme | ABBCACB DBDBEFEFEDXDGXGHHIXXBIBBXXXD XXXX |
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| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1011 0100101 10111 010101 01001101 110111 0100010011011 111111 010110111 10010011 1111111 111111 101101 1111101 11110111101 0110011101 111110011 1111001111 1101111101 11111101 1111011 0111001 1110111 011101 111111110010 110111 1111111 1011010111 111101101100110 0111111001111111 111110 111101 10101 111101 1111110111 1100110 10 1 11 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 1,152 |
| Words | 242 |
| Sentences | 4 |
| Stanzas | 3 |
| Stanza Lengths | 7, 28, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 39 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 309 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 80 |
About this poem
This is a dedication to my Daughter who was killed by an intoxicated monster On August 22, 2015. The monster got only 13 years for killing her, her friend and her puppy. He was released on July 26th, 2020 on parole because Gov. Newsome in CA released a lot of murderers and people from prison due to the virus going around. That was the excuse to let out murderers from prison. It's not fair but unfortunately the Judge gave him a plea bargain before knowing the facts. She was 21 years old and had a lot going for her. There is so much to the story that people are not speaking up. It's ok because this monster will get what is coming to him. more »
Written on March 30, 2016
Submitted by DorothyJGarcia on September 07, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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