Analysis of Synthetic skies.



I saw your true self
I heard your metallic walls
I opened you hatch
And sat at your machine
Your light entered mine
Every touching thought
Entwining control
Merging role
My heart stopped
My body not my own
You took me without permission
Now return me to my home.
Angelic messenger pay your toll
My goal your purpose
Your purpose my soul.


Scheme ABCDEFGGHIJKGLG
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 11111 1110101 11011 011101 11101 100101 101 101 111 110111 11101010 1011111 10100111 11110 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 325
Words 62
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 274
Words per stanza (avg) 62

About this poem

Being in one big spaceship that can be entered only in dream.

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Written on September 06, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on September 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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