Analysis of Neglected bed in suburbans



Many while I call on you
You turned deaf ears as dumbies
To my aid you neglected
And to my fragile heart you deserted
What did I deserved of thee
I'm a shy helpless crying Barbie's
Need you all night like moon
Don't know how you paraded and go  soon

You left me in this unwholesome mood still I thee adore
With my bended knee and fagged legs about
Bloody Samaritan I turned a salvaged ghost
Your hands all I want
From your prurient and self pride all I hails
So need you take good little care of me
And of you more, Known I would need more

Only you alone can sacrifices rest
And to mind so impulsive in lack
Buried yet in those homilies pack
I shall voices out my sounds no cracked
All I need is you, tonight.


Scheme XAXXBACC DXXXABD XEEXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1011111 111111 1111010 0111011010 1110111 101101010 111111 1111010011 111011111101 1110101101 100100110101 11111 11100011111 1111110111 011111111 1010111001 011101001 101011001 111011111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 691
Words 141
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 187
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted by Madeyin'sPetry on August 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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