Analysis of Shared Night



Is it here then, a path for my two feet?
My grip is gone, it´s such a useless life.
Only in dreams I am allowed to meet,
in phantasy I do not have to strife.
Empty all day, with you as lacking drive,
a yearning grey, a gap that doesn´t heal,
no warming voice, no beauty you conceal.
I can´t find you, you´re staying out of sight.
Just when I sleep, your image soothes my feel.
You fill my eyes with the depths of the night.


Scheme ABABCDDEDE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111011111 11111110101 1001110111 01111111 1011111101 0101011111 1101110101 111111110111 1111110111 1111101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 419
Words 86
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 317
Words per stanza (avg) 86

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Submitted by ludy_b on August 18, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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