Analysis of Patience Heals All Wounds



Apologies heard to give,
And mentioned to hear them.
Have yet to speed the time it takes,
To heal and mend...
What had been intended to break.

Tantrums to throw them and display,
Have a way to stay remembered.
And those who do this to believe,
These acts of childishness...
Should, as they age, stay tolerated.
The time does not await,
For minds like these to grow.
Not old.
But...Up!

People often apologize,
Not for the act they do consciously.
But for being caught to then refuse,
To acknowledge...
Misdeeds to do them meant.

To then accuse their childhood,
Parents, siblings and unnamed friends.
For not giving them attention to get.
When they needed someone to come,
To protect and defend them.
But no one came to do that done.

'Sorry to hear that.
It will be okay.
We as adults still make our mistakes.
Stop crying.
Everything will work out fine.
Time, patience and understanding,
Eventually heals all wounds.'

'That's what my babysitter said too.
When she used to walk me,
To nursery school everyday.
And the kids would take all the crayons.
Leaving me unable,
To color in the pictures.
After I connected the dots.'

'I...see.
And just how long ago was this?'

'I was not yet 5 years old.'

'And...
You are....how old now?'

'I will soon be 65.
But people think I am much younger.'

'Hold on.
I'll be right back.'

'Where are you going?
Don't listen to the court appointed,
Psychologist or my hired psychiatrist.
Or my babysitter.
Wherever, God knows, she could be.
Probably still trying to make me happy.
By finding similar coloring books.
I don't want them.
I want the ones I had!
And that's my final statement!
So there.
I wanna go home!'

'How long has he been babbling like that?'

'I had no idea,
His mind was twisted like that.
I don't know what to say or do.'

'Hmmm...
Try this.
I have an idea.
Go back in there.
And tell him he won!'

'Won?
Won... what?'

'Anything.
Just tell him that!


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Poetic Form
Metre 0100111 010111 11110111 1101 11101011 10111001 10111010 01111101 1111 11111100 011101 111111 11 1 1010010 110111100 111011101 1010 011111 110111 10100011 1110101011 1110111 1010011 11111111 10111 1111 1101111001 110 101111 1100010 01000111 11110011 111111 11001101 00111101 101010 1100010 10101001 1 01110111 111111 0 1111 1111 110111110 11 1111 11110 110101010 010011100100 11100 01011111 10011011110 1101001001 1111 110111 0111010 11 11011 1111110011 111010 1111011 11111111 1 11 111010 1101 01111 1 11 10 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,819
Words 357
Sentences 63
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 5, 9, 5, 6, 7, 7, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 12, 1, 3, 5, 2, 2
Lines Amount 73
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted by lpahtillah on July 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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