Analysis of The Old Man's Song

Samanvi M. 2010 (Connecticut)



An old man stands on a precipice, thinking of days bygone,
He tucks his coat and his tips hat, as he sings a weary song

‘ Where may thee live, O little rabbit,
Your slender gait and twitching ears?
I pine for you, my pipe ‘a whistling,
 A tune your ears, will never hear ’

An old man stands on a precipice, thinking of days bygone
He tucks his coat and tips hat, and walks on ‘afore too long

‘ Wolves give chase, just when thee runs,
But what chases such dauntless beasts?
A journey that lacks destination,
A hunt without a prized feast ’

An old man walks down a loud town road, thinking of days bygone
He tucks his coat and tips his hat, and spies some children in the throng

‘ Fly away, dear crow, from those three young trolls,
They’ll rip your midnight wings!
This worlds innocence, is a well played lie,
Iron mistaken for pure gold rings. ’

An old man looks into a sunken moor, barren trees swaying nearby,
He tucks his coat and tips his hat, as he sings to the wintry sky

‘ O pretty thing, your royal hue
An artists cloudless blanket,
Such an air of completeness, knowledge, pride,
Please, tell me your secret? ’  

An old man sits on a rickety bench, silently counting to ten.
He tucks his coat and tips his hat, and is never heard of again.


Scheme Ab cdxx Ab xxxx ab defe ff xcxc gg
Poetic Form
Metre 11111010010111 111101111110101 111111010 11010101 111111010 01111101 11111010010111 1111011011111 1111111 1110111 01011010 0101011 11111011110111 1111011101110001 1011111111 11111 1110010111 100101111 11110101011011011 1111011111110101 11011101 1101010 1111010101 111110 11111010011001011 1111011101101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,246
Words 240
Sentences 7
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 2, 4, 2, 4, 2, 4, 2
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Written on February 06, 2021

Submitted on July 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Samanvi M.

Samanvi M. has had a rife interest in stories & classic literature from a young age. When she began to read Shakespeare's plays and sonnets, she'd made her first foray into the world of poetry. more…

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