Analysis of The Old Man's Song
Samanvi M. 2010 (Connecticut)
An old man stands on a precipice, thinking of days bygone,
He tucks his coat and his tips hat, as he sings a weary song
‘ Where may thee live, O little rabbit,
Your slender gait and twitching ears?
I pine for you, my pipe ‘a whistling,
A tune your ears, will never hear ’
An old man stands on a precipice, thinking of days bygone
He tucks his coat and tips hat, and walks on ‘afore too long
‘ Wolves give chase, just when thee runs,
But what chases such dauntless beasts?
A journey that lacks destination,
A hunt without a prized feast ’
An old man walks down a loud town road, thinking of days bygone
He tucks his coat and tips his hat, and spies some children in the throng
‘ Fly away, dear crow, from those three young trolls,
They’ll rip your midnight wings!
This worlds innocence, is a well played lie,
Iron mistaken for pure gold rings. ’
An old man looks into a sunken moor, barren trees swaying nearby,
He tucks his coat and tips his hat, as he sings to the wintry sky
‘ O pretty thing, your royal hue
An artists cloudless blanket,
Such an air of completeness, knowledge, pride,
Please, tell me your secret? ’
An old man sits on a rickety bench, silently counting to ten.
He tucks his coat and tips his hat, and is never heard of again.
Scheme | Ab cdxx Ab xxxx ab defe ff xcxc gg |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111010010111 111101111110101 111111010 11010101 111111010 01111101 11111010010111 1111011011111 1111111 1110111 01011010 0101011 11111011110111 1111011101110001 1011111111 11111 1110010111 100101111 11110101011011011 1111011111110101 11011101 1101010 1111010101 111110 11111010011001011 1111011101101101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,246 |
Words | 240 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 4, 2, 4, 2, 4, 2, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 106 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
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Written on February 06, 2021
Submitted on July 13, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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