Analysis of Cake

Luke Breen 1998 (United States)



I would enjoy a cake
By a lake
With a snake
Drinking a shake
O, how I’d like a steak
With my cake
Eating with a spoon
Because I’m a loon
I can’t bake
I want my cake soon
I can nearly see the moon
Going down soon
If I do not get my cake
Before I wake
I will shake
In my bed alone
I will let out a moan
Let there be cake
Or at least a snake
For when I wake
I will have to bake
For tomorrow
I will make my
Cake
For heaven’s sake


Scheme AAAAAABBABBBAAACCAAAADEAA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (48%)
Metre 110101 101 101 1001 111101 111 10101 01101 111 11111 1110101 1011 1111111 0111 111 01101 111101 1111 11101 1111 11111 101 1111 1 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 417
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 322
Words per stanza (avg) 99

About this poem

It's a small poem of patience

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Written on July 09, 2021

Submitted by lbreenr1998 on July 10, 2021

Modified by Soulwriter on July 11, 2021

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