Analysis of Take The Sunshine, Leave The Rain

Alan S Jeeves 1951 (Lancashire)



If I could take my time again
A different thing I'd do;
I'd take the comfort, leave the pain,
Take the sunshine, leave the rain,
If only I could start anew.

If I could be another's son
A different path I'd choose;
I'd walk along, I wouldn't run,
I'd leave the sorrow, take the fun,
If only I could re-infuse.

If I could start another hour
A different way I'd go;
I'd take the sweetness, leave the sour,
Take the jolly, leave the dour,
If only I could make it so.

If I could live another day
I'd tread a different way;
I'd leave the turmoil, take the calm,
Leave the coarseness, take the charm,
If I could take my time again...
I'd take the sunshine, leave the rain.


Scheme Abccb dedde fgffg hhxxAc
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 0100111 11010101 101101 11011101 11110101 0100111 11011101 11010101 11011101 111101010 0100111 110101010 10101010 11011111 11110101 1101001 1101101 101101 11111101 1101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 645
Words 129
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 6
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

It was 1996 when this poem first saw the light of day.

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Alan S Jeeves

Alan S Jeeves is a Lancashire (England) born, Yorkshire based classical poet. more…

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