Analysis of Pater



I had so much to tell to you
A while ago away;
And, although our tidings few,
There seemed so much to say.
When you were old ~ whilst I was young,
I might have listened when
A weave of words, together strung,
Were tendered now and then.

But note! the hour has wandered late
And dulls the muse of mind;
Time and tide, for no man wait ~
Ago remains behind.
So, words unspoken, not to know,
Are words that time forgot,
They mattered to me then, ago
But now they matter not.


Scheme ABABCDCD EFEFGHGH
Poetic Form Traditional rhyme
Metre 11111111 010101 0110101 111111 11011111 111101 01110101 010101 110101101 010111 1011111 010101 11010111 111101 11011101 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 455
Words 94
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 8
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 179
Words per stanza (avg) 47

About this poem

A philosophical look back in time via this short (2002) poem.

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Submitted by AlanSJeeves on June 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alan S Jeeves

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