Analysis of Rut



High and lifted up ain’t no place for this ole buck.
He’s coming down gonna hit the ground He’s about to get in rut.

She was a queen that needed love but that buck thought he was way above
But She waited there with that long blonde hair, finally gonna get around to getting down and reclaim that long lost fuck.

High and lifted up ain’t no place for this ole buck.
He’s coming down gonna hit the ground He’s about to get in rut

Took a  ride on a fast machine, felt just like Steve McQueen but when the hair came down it crumbled all around, she waited 17 she’s now my Texas queen in that 4 wheel drive sittin nice and high she done claimed him back she’s stacked and packed.
Claimed back her man shits gonna hit the fan but she really don’t give a fuck.

High and lifted up ain’t no place for this ole buck.
He’s coming down gonna hit the ground He’s about to get in rut

she waited 17 she’s now my Texas queen in that 4 wheel drive sittin nice and high she done claimed him back she’s stacked and packed Claimed back her man shits gonna hit the fan, she don’t give a damn, and she really don’t give a fuck.

High and lifted up ain’t no place for this ole buck.
He’s coming down gonna hit the ground He’s about to get in rut

Did 17 without my true queen
Gonna hit the ground stop messin round time for her to be lifted up.

High and lifted up ain’t no place for this ole buck.
He’s coming down gonna hit the ground He’s about to get in rut!!!


Scheme AB xa AB xa AB a AB xx AB
Poetic Form
Metre 101011111111 1101101011011101 11011101111111101 11101111111001010111010011111 101011111111 1101101011011101 1011010111110111011111010111011110101111101111111101 110111010111101101 101011111111 1101101011011101 1101111010111110111111110111011101011110101101101 101011111111 1101101011011101 101111 1010111111011101 101011111111 1101101011011101
Characters 1,481
Words 289
Sentences 12
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 65
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

This poem is about a relationship between a man an woman. A relationship that went off the rails 17 years ago. The relationship has been restored.

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Submitted by Gary.l.vick on June 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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