Analysis of She will never

Jonathan Gil 1985 (NY, New York)



She will never know the way she makes my heart beat
Heavy breathing when she is next to me.
Dreams I get when I look into her eyes
Emotions fluttering confusion rising
Passion flows to the grip
imagining the feel of her kiss
Lips pressed together with eyes closed
To holding her in my arms like looking at rose gold
To see her walk away it takes away my breath
For I want to reach out and spin her to me like we dance
Bring her close to this and to tell her how I feel
Imagine another life where I have a ring and I kneel.

By Jonathan Gil


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Poetic Form
Metre 111010111111 1010111111 1111110101 01010001010 101101 010001101 11010111 1100011110111 110101110111 11111101011111 101110110111 010010111101011 11001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 536
Words 110
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 214
Words per stanza (avg) 55

About this poem

This poem was written about a crush at work when I worked at a certain location

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Written on June 06, 2021

Submitted by dominicanbolla20 on June 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jonathan Gil

Born and raised in NYC I've been writing poetry since I was 14 I've had poetry published by the old poetry.com and would like to continue to write on here to express myself more…

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