Analysis of God's Spirit



calling the sky to lay down the love that heals the road of life
speak the soul and life will come running
with arms wider then the sky
To Embrace the new home
Angels rejoice as tears fall with sunshine
peace is on its way
Chanting deep in my heart
Peace be with you
Heaven above my soul and it explodes with life
I see without seeing
I am so deaf but the voices chant on
on n on
I hear you within a wave  crashing against another
always believing your the star when you fade away in the water
Pieces dont fit so you force them like your Idea's
I laugh n u cry
cause your emotions
are lost at sea
I'am sailing through
the STORM
with a heart full of love
I'am the light house you ignore
now i'am the tree that falls in the forest by itself
wisdom spits like venom n you try to seek the light but home is embracing the scar's we carry
not even knowing if the path will be safe
o hum o hum, la o la, life o why, death o why, a recurrence we all face
chanting deep in my heart Peace be with you until you learn to spread your wings


Scheme ABCDEFGHABIIJJKCLMHNOPQMRST
Poetic Form
Metre 100111101110111 101011110 1110101 101011 100111111 11111 101011 1111 100111010111 110110 1111101011 111 11101011001010 1010101111010010 1011111111010 11111 11010 1111 11101 01 101111 11011101 11101110010101 101110111110111101001110 11010101111 11111111111110010111 101011111101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,002
Words 212
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 806
Words per stanza (avg) 213

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Submitted on June 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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