Analysis of If You Listen



If you listen carefully,
You can hear my heart,
Even though my darling,
We are miles apart,

Lonely I am without you,
Saddened days have I,
If only to touch you again,
As I deeply sigh,

I need you here beside me,
And I want you ever so,
Alway's, and forever,
This, please truly know,

If you listen carefully,
You can hear me calling you,
Through the gentle breeze,
Our love forever new.


Scheme Abxb cdxd aexe Acxc
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1110100 11111 101110 11101 1011011 10111 11011101 11101 1111011 0111101 10010 11101 1110100 1111101 10101 1010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 370
Words 73
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This poem is about two lover's ,one is gone, and the other is wishing for a return.

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Written on June 04, 2021

Submitted by jennybabygirl6982_1 on June 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Teresa Whitney

Born and raised in Washington State as well as growing up in S. California, I now reside in Mooresville N. C. for the past 20 yrs. A wife for 30 yrs before loosing my late husband, a mother of 2 son's , grandmother of 6 children & great grandmother of 2 . College educated with an AA in Drug and Alcohol Counseling. A past owner of 2 state licensed board and care homes for the elderly. I have traveled the U.S. over and settled in North Carolina. My family is here and new friends I have made over the years. I am an avid Poetry writer enjoying all styles of Poetry, looking forward to having my 1st Poem book published soon. more…

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