Analysis of Forgiveness Of Trespasses

Teresa Whitney 1951 (Tacoma)



Forgive me all of my trespasses,
I have been blind along my way,
Allow my tribulations to calm,
Like calming of the sea,

Aching inside a tear falls,
I continue to call out your name,
Holding onto the memories,
Dream's remaining the same,

Imagination so overwhelming,
Anger continues in stride,
Darkness is cold, and surrounding,
A feeling I now cannot hide,

Forgive me all of my trespasses,
Aching inside a tear falls,
Imagination is so overwhelming,
A pain I will always recall.


Scheme Axxa Abab cdcd AAcx
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 0111111 11110111 01101011 110101 1001011 101011111 10100100 101001 00101010 1001001 10110010 01011101 0111111 1001011 001011010 011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 464
Words 82
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Teresa Whitney

Born and raised in Washington State as well as growing up in S. California, I now reside in Mooresville N. C. for the past 20 yrs. A wife for 30 yrs before loosing my late husband, a mother of 2 son's , grandmother of 6 children & great grandmother of 2 . College educated with an AA in Drug and Alcohol Counseling. A past owner of 2 state licensed board and care homes for the elderly. I have traveled the U.S. over and settled in North Carolina. My family is here and new friends I have made over the years. I am an avid Poetry writer enjoying all styles of Poetry, looking forward to having my 1st Poem book published soon. more…

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