Analysis of Margins



Elders haunt the breathing woods
Along paths of lives less taken
Brown and orange skies foreboding
Plains of buffalo forsaken

Words of the Prophets reign fire on
Sacred ancient boneyards, broken
Outside margins, grain in ruin
Sacred, the Profits have spoken

Among the prickly pear and cactus
Anguished bones have yearned so long
Just because I don't fit in
Doesn't mean I don't belong

A breeze came to remind us of
The land where bone connects to bone
In the disappearing margins of
Ocatillo brush and stone

But skies have gotten darker now
The ancient wind just howls and moans
The weeping of the elders dims
The land where blood connects to bone

Among the prickly pear and cactus
Anguished bones have yearned so long
Just because I don't fit in
Doesn't mean I don't belong

My essence lays weary upon me
Heavy, as chain upon chain
The thresher comes for its harvest
Blessed freedom in hallowed rain

In the sacred cup of the child
The only safe refuge is death
Elder whispers among the sage
Grateful for every last breath

Among the prickly pear and cactus
Anguished bones have yearned so long
Just because I don't fit in
Doesn't mean I don't belong

© John Kennan 9-27-20


Scheme xaxa xaaa BCDC efef xxxf BCDC xgxg xhxh BCDC a
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 01111110 10101010 1110010 110101101 1010110 11101010 10010110 010101010 1011111 1011110 1011101 01110111 01110111 00010101 1101 11110101 01011101 01010101 01110111 010101010 1011111 1011110 1011101 110110011 1011011 01011110 1100101 00101101 01011011 10100101 10110011 010101010 1011111 1011110 1011101 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,136
Words 208
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted by rankstranger7 on May 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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