Analysis of sundays



some kid is crying
real tears cause
he dropped his sidewalk
sundae on the
sidewalk on a
sunday
labor day weekend
in the land of milk
n honeys
land of the free
free to never feel
nothin but
free

chocolate eyes
melt at the site
at the sight of melting
sundays on sidewalks
mommy can i have another
one no son
your sundays are all used
up down on the melting
sidewalk

i sat on
the porch in fall n
conversed with the
chill
after summer
melted all my labor
days away
sundays melting into
chocolate
stains on sidewalks
don't step in any
memories
your eyes might
melt

© John Kennan 9-7-20


Scheme AXBCCDXXEFXGF XHAIJKXAB XXCXJJDXGIFEHX K
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 111 1111 1010 110 1 1011 00111 110 1101 11101 101 1 101 1101 101110 111 10111010 111 11111 111010 1 111 01011 0110 1 1010 101110 101 11001 10 111 11010 100 111 1 110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 561
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 13, 9, 14, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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