billy.baloop

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  September 2023     4 months ago

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Carrot

Lose your freedom
Obey your orders
Live under a god
Who does not love you

 
Things I shouldn't do
That you say I really should
Do evil
To see the good

Wrestle angels
Making you responsible
For nothing
Until you die from it

"No more...

– by Muhammad The Ex-Muslim

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Perhaps could have:

He finally summons the courage to ask
“Would you care to have dinner with me?”
She looks in his eyes feigning surprise
“I'm so sorry, I am already married!”

Could work it to the same end, or a different one 

7 months ago

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