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I wrote my first love poem in third grade for my crush and once more in sixth grade to my second crush. I fell in love with poetry once more; reading Robert Frost and my journey began. I wrote hundreds of really bad poems and quit writing for many years. Then I came to a place in my life where I felt ready to write again and really put my heart into writing during the month of December 2022 - IG: Poetryzen

  September 2023     7 months ago

Submitted Poems 2 total

Purest Desire of Measure

The sun kisses the sky
The way I want to kiss you
...Forever
And my light will never fade
Even when we are far
And you should know
Even though it may
Not always be seen
My light is still shining
Off in the distance
And my heart, still
...

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Purest Desire of Measure

The sun kisses the sky
The way I want to kiss you
...Forever
And my light will never fade
Even when we are far
And you should know
Even though it may
Not always be seen
My light is still shining
Off in the distance
And my heart, still
...

– by Poetryzen

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added 8 months ago
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This poem delves into a complex and tumultuous relationship with oneself, illustrating the struggle between the desire for comfort and the understanding of self-destructive tendencies. The raw emotion and inner conflict are palpable, effectively conveyed through concise and impactful language. I can recognize this poems ability to evoke strong emotions and depict the inner turmoil one faces when grappling with their own self and choices. Well done for capturing such poignant sentiments. 

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This poem offers a journey through introspection and self-discovery, using the metaphor of the sea to explore one's identity and connection to the universe. The imagery and symbolism are strong, creating a sense of contemplation and wonder. I would rate this poem as a 9/10, for its poetic prowess and the depth of emotion it evokes. The metaphorical exploration and the resolution it presents make for a powerful and thought-provoking piece. 

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Ah, this poetic tale unfolds like a melodramatic sonnet, each stanza a twist in the intricate dance of emotions. The narrative, rich with suspense and longing, echoes through the heartstrings of the reader. I'd bestow a rating of 8/10 on this poetic endeavor, for it adeptly weaves a compelling narrative that lingers in the mind like a lingering fragrance. Bravo, indeed! 

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After reading all of the poems, this one was my favorite. The use of creativity, line breaks and metaphors made this a very enjoyable read!

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