PeacefulGem

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PeacefulGem
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Just a poet looking to get some feedback in some of her poems

  December 2022     1 year ago

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Forgotten Cake

Im crumbling
Just like old cake

Maybe it’s my destiny
Or just fate
To end up alone;
Abandoned to break

I did this to myself
Only I can take the blame
No matter what I change
The outcome will be the same

I played the game
But never...

– by Peaceful Gem

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