JokerGem
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Evokes Little Big Town's song ‘ Tornado.’
-Same vibe and message-
Some folks just churn these suckers out and there’s no denying their appeal--congrats Leslie!

These inquiry-style poems usually make for fun reads--good mix of rhyme and content here.

This is an unorthodox poem - what with the rhyme scheme being different in each stanza - but I happen to like unorthodoxy and trees are an excellent subject for artwork.
– I've been enjoying your contributions since you joined the site! more »

You’re absolutely welcome.

Forgive me for neglecting to share my thoughts on this...
The first contest l participated in was the one this was entered in and l found it remarkable--still do. Glad to see you have made it back around to this site, l appreciate your creative flair and anticipate you’ll ‘wow’ me again! more »

many thanks for sharing....l rather enjoyed this one too

They are truly mystical beings.

Holy heck this is terrific!!--almost like a succinct prayer for calibrating oneself for an impending task.

Excellently made!

I enjoyed this - you are bringing some talent to the table.

Good write!

“There is no beginning and no end,”
..only becoming.
~An enjoyable little poem!

Well, it doesn’t look like you’re struggling to get views but it is likely these are more from casual observers….Try not to think of it in terms of a social media setting. Although this site is interactive, people are drawn to what appeals to them and unfortunately, that interest may not be reciprocal. For what it's worth, l suggest you experiment with some different poetic forms or styles –if for no other reason than to say that you tried it. more »

Marvelous commentary....you're something of a poet (for sure)!

so what if they may think this sappy but this type of idealism is my groove.
I'll have to read your others as my curiosity has been aroused.

We don’t have to reward superficiality because society does.

Splendidly packaged poem ...
(my apologies for only now discovering it )
-this gently plods and prods to a satisfying conclusion.
Bravo!