Cfox57's comments

I read all the entries for this month's contest and there were many deserving a second look. There were several poems which had a well presented creativity and message placing them above the rest of the group, so after narrowing down to five and then down to two, I found this one most deserving of my vote. In addition to the admirable and impressive message, it was written very consistently in the 5 syllable meter throughout the entire poem which is an excellent achievement in itself. more »

I had four poems picked out as possible winners, decided to vote for this one. Cleverly told story; light-hearted viewpoint, flowed well with a surprise at the end.